This is such a strange yet somehow hilarious flash. I like it, nice work.
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This was done pretty well, and I liked the twist at the end. Screen shape was cool; almost made it look like you were watching TV. I'll definitely watch the sequel, so keep it up. =)
Watch the spelling and grammar..
Your flash was excellent, and I thoroughly enjoyed watching it. However, there were quite a few spelling errors, such as "damd" instead of "damn". Before you submit your next flash, go through your dialouge and check the spelling and grammar. It'll make your flash that much more professional.
Otherwise, storyline was awesome, fighting had a lot of Naruto and DBZ influence near the end, and the flow was impressively good.
Needs Improvement, a LOT of improvement.
You ready for the incredibly LONG list of things you need to do to make your flash videos not fatal to the human eye and ear? Here we go:
-You need to use Mario's sprites, not just Luigi's. Why you still use the crap portrait you do now, I have no clue. But you MUST get the real Mario sprites.
-If you are going to use voice acting, make the voices LOUDER. I couldn't hear a thing, and I don't want to turn up my speakers to full blast.
-More fluid animation is needed, What you are using now will not do at all.
-Background Music. All good flash videos have background music of some sort. It keeps the ear busy enough so that the person viewing it is not bored.
-Actual background sprites. I am officially sick of looking at the blue background of death and boredom.
-Actual floor sprites. The squares you used just don't cut it in a Mario flash. You need the real thing.
-None of that black square for open mouth crap. Get rid of that, and maybe add one or two pixels of black to where the character's mouth is on the real sprites.
-Speech bubbles or some area of text so that the users will be able to actually read the text you put on the screen, or no text at all.
That is all. 1/10 for effort.
I have not stopped laughing at this since I started watching it. "My Milkshake" and "Sam is a fine green ****" was the best.
I loved it. You even included stuff from /b/, which is awesome. You really nailed every group here. The only thing I would suggest is to improve the sound quality. Otherwise, it's perfect.
Make a sequel please.
This is an excellent music video (if that's what you were aiming for it to be). The art style is very interesting, and the video is very well done. The beginning was a little slow, but I imaging that's where you were doing your practice. I hope to see more works from you in the future. (Keep that art style, that's something that really separated this flash from others.)
This is one of the best flashes I have ever seen, period.
The visuals and effects were what really wowed me. Great work on the water, and the shadowing.
The scene with the horned guy (I don't know what it is.) was very funny, especially the part where the bigfoot threw the huge rock.
Very well done. 10/10
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